My critique is on Vanessa Russell's design
https://vanessaspatialdesign.wordpress.com
Vanessa has created an interesting and innovative design for her client. I love the contrast of sharp angular shapes vs. the soft clouds.
I really like her hand drawn and painted drawings-- they give a great sense of the atmosphere of the space she is trying to create.
The use of a digital or physical model to explore the inside spaces would be interesting to see. It would be great to see how the roof looks internally.
Her technical drawings are really clear and make it easy to understand how the space works technically.
It would be helpful to see her design in context more clearly, perhaps using images from google maps and incorporating them into perspectives.
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